Wordle 53.
The words to play with were:
aches spangling cacophony ferment dragon coda
shimmy shelved ethereal abstract origami exquisite
* * *
Her exquisite ears ached from the spangling cacophony.
The fermenting dragon was
shimmying on the shelf,
like an ethereal vision of abstract origami,
a coda to
the dream running circles in her head.
* * *
I need to admit that I have no idea if I have used these words correctly.
This just somehow sounded good to me :-)
Any critical comments are welcome!
Any critical comments are welcome!
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7 comments:
They sound good to me too, and I love the photo!
Concise piece. The photo is awesome.
Pamela
Nice, and I love the photo!
Beautiful job with the words, Inger. I love how much you pack into this short piece. Excellent!
Love how you packed so much into this short piece. You did well with and by the words,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
Your words are magical - and describe your dragon in a most whimsical way. A spangling cacophony sounds so full of color and glitter. And you tie it all together, by letting us know it is all in a dream, with the final line, "a coda to the dream running circles in her head."
I hope look and see if you have written anything about your trip!! Sorry I have been out of contact lately. xo teri
beautifully done and so succinctly ... amazing, and I love the photo as do so many others!
mine is here at THE WAY EYE SEE IT
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2012/04/coda-of-crows-dragons-angels-and-swans.html
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