My word for 2018:
My Choice

Sunday, November 18, 2012


life in action

 beauty - sorrow - pride

proud faces
beautiful faces
sad faces
- life -

fiery sorrow
pawned beauty
silent pride
- life -

silent sorrow
pawned pride
fiery beauty
- life -

silent beauty
pawned sorrow
fiery pride
life - 
in action

Who belongs?
Who wants to bust out? 
Who is right and who is wrong?

Life in action 

find myself
sorry, and 
- lost in action -

Wordle 83 - a baker's dozen.
The words to play with were:
silent, sorry, belong, beauty, faces, bust
wrong, find, life, pawn, pride, fire, unless

The Sunday Whirl


Elizabeth said...

Love your tangle of Mandalas. Each one symbolizes a life cycle and they illustrate your poem well. Do you belong to the line weaving community?


Jules said...

Thanks for visiting both of my offerings. I think in some religious views people are pawns. When the masses believe they are pawns - well they are more inclined to believe they are just tools of the gods. And will give all they can just for the promise of what will be (hopefully better than what is). I hope that makes sense. That's sort of where I was going with that particular phrase. Interesting though that 'Gods' would have to recruit 'men' to do their bidding?

As for connectedness...(which apparently isn't a word...) I think that we could all go into a museum and find bits and pieces of ourselves encoded in the history of busts, paintings and even other works of art. :)

Faces are indeed windows to emotions. I like how you danced the same words in different circles.

Mama Pajama said...

excellent! I like the repeats, and the way the words loop around each other, together. reminds me of a pantoum...

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, how lovely...

Leovi said...

Definitely great thoughts about life.