and for one loaded moment
he held her gaze -
then his eyes skimmed across her skin -
so tactile was his look that
she shuddered, and swayed slightly
wishing the moment would never end.
His heart would forever be filled with memories of the
sight before him.
Their clothes were left in a heap,
and as time fell away
flecks of sunlight moved across the sand.
* * * * *
Wordle 84
The words to play with were:
still scent sight fell fleck sway
15 comments:
Beautifully done! Very smoothly, sensually, done. I blanch at the wordle challenges.
You inspired me - I gave it a go!
Very sensual imagery. Romantic and lovely setting.
Very good wordling.
Beautiful imagery, "fly away."
Very sensual.
Yes, sensual, but smooth and splendidly crafted,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/first-kiss/
Gorgeous and lush. Inger this is fine writing. I love the way your words wash over me.
Love the warm, intimate sensuality of your words. Impressive wordling, and I am glad you encouraged J Cosmo to give wordles a try too. Smiles.
sensual, hot yet soft.
Inger, what a sensual experience with your writing here. I went to the ocean myself with the words, but not as peaceful. Nice poem.
Pamela
beautiful! love the feeling and motion, and time falling away...
Lovely...now if I could afford a vacation condo on a beach...
Glad you enjoyed both pieces. Not everyone is a fan of the story verse so I started writing a second piece.
Hopefully next week's list will allow for a more detailed encounter to "As the Whirl Turns..." :)
very nice, the power of a look...
A very fine wordle.
Love the line - His heart would forever be filled with memories of the sight before him. I love a good romance!
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