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Saturday, November 24, 2012

The still, scented air

The still, scented air seeped into flared nostrils
and for one loaded moment
he held her gaze -
then his eyes skimmed across her skin -
so tactile was his look that
she shuddered, and swayed slightly
wishing the moment would never end.
His heart would forever be filled with memories of the
sight before him.

Their clothes were left in a heap,
and as time fell away
flecks of sunlight moved across the sand.

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Wordle 84
The words to play with were:
still  scent  sight  fell  fleck  sway
load  heap  skimmed  held  end  fill

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15 comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Beautifully done! Very smoothly, sensually, done. I blanch at the wordle challenges.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

You inspired me - I gave it a go!

Daydreamertoo said...

Very sensual imagery. Romantic and lovely setting.
Very good wordling.

annell said...

Beautiful imagery, "fly away."

Annette said...

Very sensual.

Elizabeth said...

Yes, sensual, but smooth and splendidly crafted,

Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/first-kiss/

brenda w said...

Gorgeous and lush. Inger this is fine writing. I love the way your words wash over me.

Mary said...

Love the warm, intimate sensuality of your words. Impressive wordling, and I am glad you encouraged J Cosmo to give wordles a try too. Smiles.

Paige said...

sensual, hot yet soft.

flaubert said...

Inger, what a sensual experience with your writing here. I went to the ocean myself with the words, but not as peaceful. Nice poem.

Pamela

Mama Pajama said...

beautiful! love the feeling and motion, and time falling away...

Jules said...

Lovely...now if I could afford a vacation condo on a beach...

Glad you enjoyed both pieces. Not everyone is a fan of the story verse so I started writing a second piece.

Hopefully next week's list will allow for a more detailed encounter to "As the Whirl Turns..." :)

awakenedwords said...

very nice, the power of a look...

Tumblewords: said...

A very fine wordle.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Love the line - His heart would forever be filled with memories of the sight before him. I love a good romance!